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The Summer Evening 

 

I remember that one summer evening,

Where I walked along the path as slow as a tortoise.

 

The sky was like a painting,

The sun the focal point, the clouds the background.

 

I sat beneath the cherry blossom tree,

On the soft grass.

 

Then I saw it,

A young girl in a white dress.

 

She was running across the field of daisies,

Her feet bare.

 

Her smile as precious as a newborn baby,

Her eyes as mesmerising as dancing flames.

 

I heard her laughter, and felt nostalgic,

As I saw my younger self in her.

 

As I walked home, I couldn’t help but smile to myself,

Carrying that moment quietly as a secret

 

by Uma Mahesweri Viju

 

Editor’s Note

Memories are a deep well visited time after time by makers of stories and poetry, but this particular poem is unusual because of its focus being centred on the memory of a memory.

Beginning as slowly and gently as that ‘tortoise’ in the second line, it moves into a central section of movement and mystery: that ‘young girl in a white dress’,  who is she, and who is she to the writer?   The poem’s final lines answer those questions beautifully.